please help i need to know if this is good enough o be written its a liitle long but i need to know?

Question

it
i have to write a short story for english and I based it on my cousins friend who died in a drinking and diving accident at nyu
its about a girl in her first year at nyu. shes an ra and works in banana republic. she has a wonderful bf who makes her promise not to drink and tells her he has a surprise for her. so she goes to the party and her bff gets drunk and forces her to get in the car. she refuses thinking of her bf zach and dosent go. later her bfff crashes into a car and kills someone and it turns out that the car she crashed into was her bf's zach who was coming down from upstate to give her surprise for their 4 year anniversey. the whole story is in a flashback starting from her at the cemetry. and i know the story is sad buti had to write it. And in the end when the flashback ends her bff asks for forgivness and she has a hard time but ends up forgiving cause she knew that zach is watching her from heaven and would have want her to do the right thing. how does it sound .

Answer 1

Yep, sounds good. I'm sure you'll do well

Answer 2

that sounds really good, and its such a sad story.hopefully u added dialogue and stuff to make it more than just a paragraph, or is that how long its supposed to be.check spellin and grammar and try not to abbreviate like but what RA stands for and stuff like that, at leat the first time u mention it dont abbreviate

Answer 3

Sounds good.

Answer 4

LOTS of spelling and grammar errors

Answer 5

looks good ur sure to get a good grade..good luck!

Answer 6

it's ok. it depends on the topic.